I need an opinion on a poem to know how to improve?
Im an aspiring artist/poet and need constructive critisism to help me improve. Check me out at
http://www.authspot.com/Poetry/Falling-to-Pieces.550045 poem
http://www.picable.com/Art/Painting/Serenity.550621 art
I really like your art. Keep up with that seriously. But i’m not too sure about the poetry. It’s really cheezy and it may be genuine and full of emotion to you but that’s not what comes across when I read it. It seems like you write poetry in your spare time, in or a journal or mostly for yourself. If you want to write poetry for other people you have to really think about your reader here.
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